Friday, November 11, 2011

These Are Just Clothes


In recent years the influence of clothes on our life has grown. People are judging other people by their clothing, and everyone want(gr.) to wear Brand names. In my opinion, the issue around clothes is even deeper – I think that clothes can actually influence our feelings.s

Let's face it, everyone wants to look good and even more than that, to feel good. Clothes can make a person feel the best or the worst. If the person likes the way he is dressed, he will feel better with himself, more than a person who doesn't look good(phr.- not clear what you mean). It's a simple equation – if people want to feel good and clothes can make them feel like that, it's just obvious that people will want to wear the trendiest and the most beautiful clothes. When they do this they do something which is accepted, so it makes them feel accepted, normal, fashionable, attractive and more. That's exactly the reason why people wear designers' clothes. People want to feel accepted and buying designers' clothes is accepted thing(phr). (An)other reason may be the fact that there is a stigma that people who don't wear designers' clothes are a bit weird. No one wants to feel like that, so people buy them. d

Moreover, people are fitting(gr.-use the present simple) their clothes to the different events in their life(gr.-lives). For example, in weddings, women wear white dresses because white is a festive color, the color of cleanliness. A Wedding is a happy event, so by wearing a happy color, people fit themselves to the situation. Let's take another example. In funerals people wear black clothes because black is a color of sadness. (A) Funeral is a sad event, so by wearing a sad color people fit themselves to the situation. On a daily base, when there isn't any special event, people choose the color of their clothes in fitting to their mood. If a person is happy he will probably wear multi - colored
 clothes and If a person isn't so happy he will wear dark clothes. It's always the same idea – people wear clothes that state their feelings and fit the different situations.d

To conclude, although we can't ignore the huge place that clothes have in our life, we must remember – these are just clothes! We mustn't let them determine our feelings. And here is something which is even more important, we are the most beautiful when we wear clothes which fit us, so it doesn't matter what you wear, the person you are - 
!that's the important thing
!

Your paragraphs are still too long.You will have to find a way to choose what is the most important and leave our anything else. 

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Daphna.

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