27/11/1939
Dear Mr. Cattanzara,
I do not have enough words to describe what I feel. I think our meeting, ten years after we saw each other for the last time, is the most exciting thing that happened(gr.) to me lately. As you know, we didn't have(gr.) enough time to see each other face to face and talk so, I thought that a letter is(gr.) the best way to talk to you again.
Do you remember me ten years ago? An irresponsible young boy, who escapes(gr.) from his reality and feels(gr.) lonely all the time. The truth is that thanks to you I have changed. Your words: "don't do what I did" are always in my head. After you told me these words, I made the change. It was the first time I took responsibility over my life and started reading books. After the reading, I understood that my destiny would be determined only by me. I completed high school with excellent grades and continued to higher education. I also worked during all the period of my studies and made some money. The(ww.) life became better, but now not because of a lie, but because I decided that I can(gr.) make it to be like that. (phr.).
I want to tell you a little secret. When I was the previous George(phr.), I used to go to the park and dream about a better life with a private house with a porch, with a girlfriend, with money and a great job. Now, ten years after these dreams, I'm the happiest and proudest man in the world to say that I fulfilled them. Today I'm married to a wonderful wife, lives(gr.) in a private house and works(gr.) in a huge hospital. Did(gr.) you believe that a guy who quit school one day would(wo.) become a doctor?
All that wouldn't have happened without you. I want to say thank you again, that you have never given up on me and made me to be(מיותר) what I am today.
All that wouldn't have happened without you. I want to say thank you again, that you have never given up on me and made me to be(מיותר) what I am today.
Your little squirt,
Georgei
You still have to work on your essay.Georgei
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Daphna
Wow Liri! You are amazing! Your writing is really interesting, exciting and creative.
ReplyDeleteYou Write beautifully . Excellent :)
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ReplyDeleteLirloorrr.. from all of the wirting that I have ever seen you are the best.. you write exactly what you need .. you do not have Grammar mistake.
ReplyDeleteYou are very creative and I can see investment .. and you thought about all the ins and outs.